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I would like to recommend this story to readers of this site. It's short, well written, has a great plot and good character development. And okay! I did help Pietar out with the review and some minor editing.
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timmy
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Has no life at all |
Location: UK, in Devon
Registered: February 2003
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Links, chaps!
Forlorn is easy to link to.
Easy to read, too. More, please.
Author of Queer Me! Halfway Between Flying and Crying - the true story of life for a gay boy in the Swinging Sixties in a British all male Public School
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This is a good, well written, and realistic short story, from which we can all take away a little message about life. Thoroughly enjoyable and recommend it. Thanks to Tim for giving the link (I probably wouldn't have found it without this thread and link 😁).
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Pietar
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Getting started |
Registered: September 2019
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Thank you first for reading, and second for commenting. This story took a bit more effort to write than others I have posted on other sites. As I said at the end, it is not my biography, although elements of my life were included. I did have a job (for 1 week) de-tasseling corn, and I did have a friend somewhat like one of my main characters. But the total content of the story is pure fiction. I am happy you enjoyed it, and my thanks as well to timmy for posting the link. I didn't know it was necessary. I'm new here and have only had time to read parts of a few other stories here myself, but I do have a rough idea of another story that I hope to add sometime soon. Again, thanks for commenting.
Pietar
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