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Taming my work  [message #70505] Wed, 04 November 2015 02:01 Go to previous message
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I have been trying very hard to tame my work, making less pornographic and more generally acceptable.  Paradoxically, my attempt to make this short piece less explicit served only to sharpened its focus.

Wondering if you missed it?
  
http://iomfats.org/storyshelf/hosted/larkin/shorts/a-monogra ph-new-york-april-1912.html

Has anyone else had a sexually graphic piece that they tried to tidy up without destroying it?



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