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Poetry by Jackboy  [message #72530] Thu, 09 February 2017 09:23 Go to next message
solsticeman is currently offline  solsticeman   United Kingdom

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Jackboy is a new author, sorry I mean poet, here. I don't often read poetry, it's over too quickly for me. Jack though has a child-like wonder at the world around him that I find delightful. I just had to edit that sentence... the word delightful twice in one sentence really wont do, but summed matters up ... delightfully.
Re: Poetry by Jackboy  [message #72531 is a reply to message #72530] Thu, 09 February 2017 14:08 Go to previous message
Jackboy is currently offline  Jackboy   United Kingdom

Toe is in the water
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Thanks Soliceman.
Much appreciated; and more on the way. Actually why can't I be called delightful twice like that? "Help Help I'm being repressed into one per sentence".

Jack.
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