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Chiaroscuro  [message #75752] Tue, 14 May 2019 18:48 Go to next message
Teddy is currently offline  Teddy

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Chiaroscuro by Joe Casey

http://iomfats.org/storyshelf/hosted/joe-casey/shorts/chiaro scuro.html

Without throwing spoiler into the mix, this particular genre of story is not one we see much of on these sites but frankly, I think it's the best gay teen stories I've read for quite some time. Not only is it well written but it opens a door or shines a little bit of the light of understanding into places or thoughts or areas that many of us are afraid to go. Thanks Joe, for this one. Well done. Smile



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Re: Chiaroscuro  [message #75753 is a reply to message #75752] Tue, 14 May 2019 19:27 Go to previous messageGo to next message
luvtwinks is currently offline  luvtwinks

Likes it here

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I could tell the genre of this story early on and that really didn't interest me so I stopped reading. However, after reading Teddy's comments perhaps I will revisit the story to see what it has to offer. Never hurts to get out of one's comfort zone once in a while.
Re: Chiaroscuro  [message #75754 is a reply to message #75752] Tue, 14 May 2019 22:04 Go to previous messageGo to next message
joecasey is currently offline  joecasey

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I thank you very much for your kind comments on the story.  I warned Timmy when I submitted the story that it might not fall within the "guidelines" this site has set for itself and that I would completely understand it if he told me that he wanted to pass on it.  For some reason (no spoilers) this is where the photograph took me.  I was afraid that the story had landed here with a dull thud; very heartening to see that some people are reading and responding to it.  I enjoyed writing it and exploring just a very little bit of that world and I hope I did it some justice.
Re: Chiaroscuro  [message #75761 is a reply to message #75754] Wed, 15 May 2019 11:02 Go to previous message
timmy

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"joecasey wrote on Tue, 14 May 2019 23:04"
I thank you very much for your kind comments on the story.  I warned Timmy when I submitted the story that it might not fall within the "guidelines" this site has set for itself and that I would completely understand it if he told me that he wanted to pass on it.  For some reason (no spoilers) this is where the photograph took me.  I was afraid that the story had landed here with a dull thud; very heartening to see that some people are reading and responding to it.  I enjoyed writing it and exploring just a very little bit of that world and I hope I did it some justice.

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I'm not really sure why you thought it might be outside the site's niche, especially in a challenge tale.



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