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Wow Lenny!  [message #11002] Mon, 09 June 2003 03:47 Go to next message
Alma is currently offline  Alma

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You sure know how to paint a picture! I´m really impressed, your story the kiss of life made me feel. That´s it. Feel. I´m right now half way through the first son. I love Sebastian, he has such an attractive personality Smile. Yesterday, I was reading about Raphaèl´s suicide attempt when my friends came to pick me up. They had to drag me away from my lap! I was so into it. hehehe. Thanks for sharing. Love much. Your friend, Alma.
icon7.gif Re: Wow Lenny!  [message #11006 is a reply to message #11002] Mon, 09 June 2003 04:22 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Yeah, Lenny's a great writer and First Son is wonderful. I love the way he manages to keep his characters so fresh.

Think good thoughts,
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icon7.gif Wow Alma!  [message #11023 is a reply to message #11002] Mon, 09 June 2003 15:51 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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THANK YOU!

Those were some of the nicest words anyone's ever written to me, I am so glad to hear you liked the stories... Yes, definitely 'wow' is the expression to use here.

Awesome! I'd hug you if I could. Smile

Your friend:
-Lenny



"But he that hath the steerage of my course,
direct my sail."

-William Shakespeare, Romeo and Juliet, Act One, Scene IV
My praise isn't quite so eloquent.  [message #11063 is a reply to message #11023] Tue, 10 June 2003 09:58 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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And I've never sent it your way before, however I would like to say that your characters are some of the most gorgeously described characters I've read, you have a real knack for making me fall for them, despite them only being written on paper Razz My only quibble is that these gorgeous gay guys are all rich, how are us mortals meant to have a chance with them! President's son, super child prodigy, son of a rich artist, some rich British guy, heh, I think I'll be lucky if I end up with someone with a family situation 1/4 as good as theirs...



Look at this tree. I cannot make it blossom when it suits me nor make it bear fruit before its time [...] No matter what you do, that seed will grow to be a peach tree. You may wish for an apple or an orange, but you will get a peach.
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icon6.gif Oh the joys of being an online writer...  [message #11088 is a reply to message #11063] Tue, 10 June 2003 23:50 Go to previous message
lenny is currently offline  lenny

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Hey Saben, you don't have to be so darn eloquent to write me, I appreciate it fine anyway, and I think you did a really great job too! Thank you!

You were certainly a whole lot more well-spoken than this fellow who wrote me just a few hours ago:


Subject: Christmas Carol, Ch. 17
>Is this story finished or what? You left in a learch.

Dear XXXXXXXXX,

I'll try not to be annoyed, but your email comes through to me like, "Eey you! I just ate this five-course meal you bought and paid for and I didn't get any dessert! What kinda service is that huh?!"

I suppose you're actually trying to give a compliment here, even though it's kind of an obscure one. No, the story isn't finished. I'm still writing it. Please be patient, I don't earn any money doing this you know... Smile

Anyway, I am glad you seem to have liked it enough to read all 17 parts, so thank you for taking the time to write me. I do appreciate it.


Sincerely:
*ZUSTARA*
A K A L V


...So yes, I think you did just fine. Smile And before anyone here thinks I snubbed this guy and came off as some kind of smart-aleck with him, try to imagine how many hours of work it is writing over 70.000 words worth of story. Smile While he probably didn't mean it, I must admit his general attitude seemed kinda unappreciative/ungrateful and pissed me off a bit...

And number 2: while you do have a point with that quibble, you also have to realize the writer of these stories is a very poor person himself, and must be allowed to have some dreams of his own too! All this, all my writings is total escapism from my regular dreary existence on my behalf... Besides, not *all* my gorgeous gay guys are rich, though they might be in majority at the moment, I really haven't checked myself. Smile

Thank you so much for your kind words anyway!

Hugs:
-L



"But he that hath the steerage of my course,
direct my sail."

-William Shakespeare, Romeo and Juliet, Act One, Scene IV
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