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Come on dude, I am going to start taking this personally if you dont stop writing such depressing stories. This is killing me.... Im just glad about marks. Keep on writing smith!! Maybe a happy episode for me next time...
Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?
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robert bryce
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Registered: January 1970
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i hope that Jord does not end up with the girl,noble and all that,but isnt this supposed to be s gay story where the guy gets the guy and not the girl.smith sure knows how to make us cry....rob
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i hit enter too quickly. what it should have been was "...ouch." and then:
the gay story i'm writing involves a girl. and she's there in the mix. at least now i know i certainly won't submit that one here. perhaps if i would have come here and pretended i had a penis that would've hurt less.
then again, us girls are overly sensitive.
my void does not want.
-- 2.13.61.
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Registered: March 2012
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Hey post the story. You are a girl and being a girl is what you know how to be best and plus know about. You write base on what you know, pretending you have penis won't help and won't make it anybetter. Anyways i would love to read about a girl's point of view in a world were society might not accept them. I bet it won't be that much of a difference from a gay story, apart from the obvious. I think gays and lesbians go through the same difficulties.
Don't get discourage and post your story. I'm sure people here will appreciate it.
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i have a different story i'm going to submit though, one that's less serious and has more to do with the criteria. it goes with the site, though, it's gay-male related and everything. you'd be surprised how much i know of it, mechanics and mind and heart and otherwise. despite obvious femininity, i was serious when i said i should have been born a boy. there should be smiley icons in there, i'm just too exhausted to move my mouse to click them, heh.
thanks though. and now that i've totally invaded a thread with stuff i shouldn't --
smith, the chapter was very very verrry soul-gutting. i loved it. i promise i won't smack danny around ... yet. i'll wait it out and be patient. insert another smiley here.
my void does not want.
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robert bryce
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Registered: January 1970
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Ah but what you dont know about rob is that he is an insensitive clod that dont know how to be nice to girls.Since it is rob that is writing these lies about him,I guess they may be true..Dont be so sensitive the guys here do allow girls in their treehouse,rob just doesnt like girls cause he is still mad at his mother for dropping him on his head at birth....rob
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i don't know what's more sad: the fact that reading that is like, the second time i smiled today, or that i had to backspace that nine times before deciding to type it, for fear of treading the wrong way.
i never much belonged in tree-houses, anyway. i was more a concrete and grass person.
my void does not want.
-- 2.13.61.
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Can't say I liked it because I loved it. Poor guys, so split apart, both trying to do the right thing by themselves and each other and their friends and their families......This isn't just a story that mirrors real life, ppl....it's real life in a bottle.
The thing about good fiction, or any good story is how much reality you bring to the fantasy, and how much you find yourself identifying with the characters at some level. So for all of you who are a little upset and feeling depressed about how this is turning, remember, not everything is happily ever after, and even that has to go through hell the long way to get there. Enjoy the ride.
Keep going smith, you've already snatched the pebble from whatever master you trained under's hand. Keep flying.
D'Artagnon
It's not the wolf you see you should fear, but all the ones he howls with. Don't be afraid of the song, but don't piss off the choir.
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I just love the story, although I hate Jordan's father's religion beliefs.
You rock, smith.
Blake's my boy.
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timmy
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Location: UK, in Devon
Registered: February 2003
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So read it and, well, read it 
Author of Queer Me! Halfway Between Flying and Crying - the true story of life for a gay boy in the Swinging Sixties in a British all male Public School
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No Message Body
my void does not want.
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robert bryce
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Really getting into it |
Registered: January 1970
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Young lady you have EARNED a rightful place in all our hearts.Your whit and sense of humor and joy bring life to this forum and you make this place fun.I get your point--you bring your hopes and dreams here and that is a very good thing.The most awsome thing is that you share your hopes and dreams..You make this a better place....rob
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wow .. thank you. i only really talk to a couple people here outside the board (so far), and feel/fear i've off-put or freaked out others (long story), so that means a lot, thank you, rob.
my void does not want.
-- 2.13.61.
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Yes; and just like Jordan, smith also knows what that concept called friendship truly means. We should all take a lesson from both of them on that; but sadly, some of us choose simply to not listen.
We do not remember days...we remember moments.
Cesare Pavese
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Very well said, D'Artagnon!
Stories about your basic gay sex orgy are a penny a pound (and are, in fact, available free of charge at sites like Nifty). The story under discussion here is on a much (much) higher plane of meaning and quality than all those other stories put together.
One minor quibble, though: one cannot teach how to write a story like this. A story like this must come from straight from the heart (which is exactly where this one comes from).
We do not remember days...we remember moments.
Cesare Pavese
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robert bryce
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Really getting into it |
Registered: January 1970
Messages: 414
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Im sorry that you feel that way Ron,but I do think that friendship begins in the heart and we all have hearts.....rob
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robert bryce
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Registered: January 1970
Messages: 414
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Nifty has some pretty good stories if you look for them,and as I recall,Nifty was pretty much the pioneer in gay fiction.many guy writers got their start there.....rob
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