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Can you guess what I'm writing about ???? think hard!  [message #22089] Wed, 01 September 2004 03:59 Go to next message
thirdfencepost is currently offline  thirdfencepost

Really getting into it
Location: NJ
Registered: May 2003
Messages: 724



Back forth, back forth
Forward, halt; about face, retreat
What a life my firend, what a life
Everyday the same as the day before,
I think

I look to the sky; still there
I look to the ground; still blue
That creak in my spine? Oh my! Still there

The light reflects off the glassy floor
Waves bounce; I’m blinded
Flashes continue incessantly
On off; black white

Everyday the same as the day before,
I think.
Please let me frolic
Run free with the others
I swallow;
Don’t worry;
Just needed a drink

I long to voyage!
I want to see,
The magical stories, told by others.

Yet I’m chained
Tied to my doom
The waters so cold
Frightfully cold
I hope my seams don’t split.
My toes are submerged
They have been for so long
I’ve forgotten how they appear
They’ve not moved in years
The foghorn sounds; Dear lord!
My memory returns
It must be morning
Sighing I straighten myself
Try to hold firm

Another day same as before;
I think.

The foghorn sounds again,
My body shivers in remembrance
Back forth; up down.
Wait a moment:
This isn’t right!

In the distance I see a glimmer off the glassy surface
Closer it comes,
Closer.
The steel acknowledges me
Metal collides fast
Chipping my side
Rumbling it pushes forward.
I wince in pain. And hold my ground
I wont let him move me!
Another piece flakes away,
More of him pushes in;
He wraps a wet arm around me,
Pulling tight
I can’t get away
I’m suffocating God!
I’m to young to die!
Sputtering I try to raise my mouth
I can’t die; I can’t

Manic voices echo loudly above me
Their footsteps reverberate
My limbs feel the pain
Part of my back cracks
The pain grows,
The steps amble away
What’s that?
I feel something still rubbing...

“Oh My” I cry out
I feel the steel rub
Slowly I try to slide away
My lines strain
No use,
I’m tied to strong

Everyday the same as before
I think



Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?
Re: Can you guess what I'm writing about ???? think hard!  [message #22092 is a reply to message #22089] Wed, 01 September 2004 07:09 Go to previous messageGo to next message
timmy

Has no life at all
Location: UK, in Devon
Registered: February 2003
Messages: 13796



Sounds like one of the Isle of Wight car ferries



Author of Queer Me! Halfway Between Flying and Crying - the true story of life for a gay boy in the Swinging Sixties in a British all male Public School
Re: Can you guess what I'm writing about ???? think hard!  [message #22096 is a reply to message #22089] Wed, 01 September 2004 22:23 Go to previous messageGo to next message
marc is currently offline  marc

Needs to get a life!

Registered: March 2003
Messages: 4729



Perhaps a buoy.... or is that a bouy?



Life is great for me... Most of the time... But then I meet people online... Very few are real friends... Many say they are but know nothing of what it means... Some say they are, but are so shallow...
Re: Can you guess what I'm writing about ???? think hard!  [message #22100 is a reply to message #22096] Thu, 02 September 2004 01:48 Go to previous message
thirdfencepost is currently offline  thirdfencepost

Really getting into it
Location: NJ
Registered: May 2003
Messages: 724



hehe getting warm



Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?
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