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Poem I wrote about Nigel and Chris (From the story)  [message #31466] Thu, 27 April 2006 14:22 Go to next message
Josh is currently offline  Josh

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This is a poem that I wrote about Chris and Nigel. I hope you all like it.

I want you to hold me. Hold me tight, and don’t let go. Let me be with you. Let me cry on you. Let me be with you. Let me stay with you. Let me come to you, let me kiss you, let me share my life with you. Let’s be lovers, you and I…

We have to hide the love we have. Because, everyone would flip out if they knew what we do at night.. How we love eachother, how we are close to eachother, how we know eachother.. How I love feeling you, your cock, hard and smooth..

It was only two days ago, that I was a kid.. And now look at me, I’m in love with a boy, a beautiful, how, sexy, unbelievable boy… And it doesn’t matter what they think, because right now, I’m with you, and that’s all that matters.. Let us make love once more..

Take me in the street, and kiss me, in front of everyone else. Let them know that we love eachother, and let her know how I truly feel about you.. I love you, and I’m not ashamed of it at all.. I just want to be with you, every second of the day, every minute of my life, is for you. I need you, I need to feel you…

Kiss me, lick me, fuck me, love me… That is what I want from you, to love me with all your heart…
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and thats the poem.^^ hope you all like it.^^

~Josh~



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~Josh~
Re: Poem I wrote about Nigel and Chris (From the story)  [message #31469 is a reply to message #31466] Thu, 27 April 2006 15:19 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Brian1407a is currently offline  Brian1407a

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The poem is nice Josh. Wish I could write. I got a lot of good ideas but I dont know how to write them and make it come out right. Have you read any of the stories by Grasshopper? He is really good and I love reading his stories, even tho they make me cry a lot.



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Re: Poem I wrote about Nigel and Chris (From the story)  [message #31484 is a reply to message #31469] Thu, 27 April 2006 22:39 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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thanks. im glad you like the poem. i dont usually use words like fuck and cock when i write, so i was somewhat blushing about that.

im glad you like my poem^_^

~Josh~



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~Josh~
Re: Poem I wrote about Nigel and Chris (From the story)  [message #31486 is a reply to message #31484] Thu, 27 April 2006 22:42 Go to previous messageGo to next message
timmy

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Smile

I like those boys too. A lot Smile

Thank you for writing a poem about the way they make oyu feel



Author of Queer Me! Halfway Between Flying and Crying - the true story of life for a gay boy in the Swinging Sixties in a British all male Public School
Your poem  [message #31491 is a reply to message #31484] Thu, 27 April 2006 23:05 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Deeej is currently offline  Deeej

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Hi Josh,

The Chris and Nigel stories are great. In fact, I read them first years and years ago, long before I noticed this board or had anything to do with it. It was the first time I ever came across teenage romance (I was completely in the closet at the time and terrified of being caught).

It's wonderful that you're enjoying them too -- Timmy's site and his stories are a great service to the community (whichever community that might be).

Thanks for posting your poem.

Deeej
Re: Your poem  [message #31544 is a reply to message #31491] Fri, 28 April 2006 14:14 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Josh is currently offline  Josh

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your welcome Deeej

I'm glad you liked my poem. I'm hoping that I can write another one and post it here if thats okay with the group^_^

~Josh~



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~Josh~
Re: Poem I wrote about Nigel and Chris (From the story)  [message #31565 is a reply to message #31486] Sat, 29 April 2006 01:04 Go to previous message
Josh is currently offline  Josh

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TIMMY^_^

I so wish they were real. If they were, I'd glomp them and hug them^_^ and then i'd let them get back to their business.^^

I'll write another one for you tomorrow^_^

you really have an awesome story going^_^

LOVE YOU^_^(L

(Just as a note, I love everyone^_^(L)

*glomps and huggles everyone^_^*

~Josh~



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Love who you want to.

~Josh~
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