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Another poem, by me.  [message #32940] Tue, 20 June 2006 00:51 Go to next message
Josh is currently offline  Josh

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The Flow of Your Face, by Joshua

Kiss away my tears this night,
make me forget there ever was,
a night without you by my side..
Let us have this night,
where we can share pur love.
Dont let me leave,
dont let me cry,
Just love me..
Love me with all your heart,
like you always say you do..
Dont let me be caught
in the pool of your tear,
the ripples touch me,
waving my skin, tearing it slowly,
Dont let me be caught,
in the river of pain,
Let it just be us this night,
Lovers, as it was meant to be..

Let's make love, one more time,
before the sun rises,
and I can feel your lips, brasively touch mine,
moving quickly, trying to run away from time,
trying to make you mine.
Let us be lovers, fair and true,
But let me never say that I love you.

Just for tonight,
after this, there are no goodbyes,
only waves to eachother,
Slow waves, lasting forever, in a pool of my dreaming memory,
Let me remember your face,
as I can no longer see..
You gave me your eyes, so that I could see,
and for that, it's more then a memory,
what we had, what was and is,
will always stay by me,
Forever in the heart, of the person who could see me..

Dont let me cry, as the sun touches my eyes,
a burning feeling,
i sink to the floor,
Dont let me cry another tear anymore..
Let me have eyes so I can see you,
One last time...



21.

Love who you want to.

~Josh~
Re: Another poem, by me.  [message #32973 is a reply to message #32940] Tue, 20 June 2006 19:44 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Brian1407a is currently offline  Brian1407a

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Nice poem. I like it



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Re: Another poem, by me.  [message #33027 is a reply to message #32940] Wed, 21 June 2006 18:29 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Brian1407a is currently offline  Brian1407a

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Hey yeh, submit your poems to Timmy and he can post them in the poetry section, way cool. Youll be published.



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Re: Another poem, by me.  [message #33031 is a reply to message #33027] Wed, 21 June 2006 19:18 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Josh is currently offline  Josh

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thanks^^ How can I submit them to Timmy tho?^^

im glad you liked my poem.^^

~Josh~



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~Josh~
Re: Another poem, by me.  [message #33033 is a reply to message #33031] Wed, 21 June 2006 19:21 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Brian1407a is currently offline  Brian1407a

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Just email Timmy and ask. He will tell you what to do.



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Re: Another poem, by me.  [message #33036 is a reply to message #32940] Wed, 21 June 2006 21:03 Go to previous messageGo to next message
marc is currently offline  marc

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It's a nice poem....

It made me feel kind of warm inside....



Life is great for me... Most of the time... But then I meet people online... Very few are real friends... Many say they are but know nothing of what it means... Some say they are, but are so shallow...
Re: Another poem, by me.  [message #33066 is a reply to message #33036] Fri, 23 June 2006 00:13 Go to previous message
Josh is currently offline  Josh

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yay^_^ im glad it made you feel warm inside^^ *feels loved*^^

thanks^^

~Josh~



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Love who you want to.

~Josh~
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