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Another Poem, from a Lonely Mind..^^  [message #36174] Thu, 28 September 2006 01:06 Go to next message
Josh is currently offline  Josh

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This is a poem that I just finished writing^^

I hope you all like it^^

~Josh~

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Revenge... - Inspired by Someday by Nickelback ~Josh~

Living in a Broken World,
We each try to survive,
Trying to bring something back that was lost,
Trying to remember the good times,

When everyone got along, and no one was alone,
How great those times were,
How Wonderful we all were, together like a family..

Yet,
For the One who has lost everything,
A little boy, black eyes,
There is nothing for him,
No happiness, or sadness,
Just an empty void, and a Heart full of Revenge..

May he Find Eternal Peace
in this Darkened World of unceratin tomorrows,
and Be forgiven, as his heart is silently crying in the night,
behind the blank face, the frozen smile,

Lies the heart of that same boy...
May be find rest in the arms of Family...

~Josh~



21.

Love who you want to.

~Josh~
Re: Another Poem, from a Lonely Mind..^^  [message #36182 is a reply to message #36174] Thu, 28 September 2006 02:42 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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I LOVE it. Josh

Jay



So say what you want
(You know I'm wasting all my time)
You've gotta mean it when you say what you want
(You're only safe when you're alone)
And everybody's on your mind
Saying anything to get you by
Re: Another Poem, from a Lonely Mind..^^  [message #36183 is a reply to message #36182] Thu, 28 September 2006 02:43 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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My I ask what your major is/or will be in collage, if you decide to go that path.

Jay



So say what you want
(You know I'm wasting all my time)
You've gotta mean it when you say what you want
(You're only safe when you're alone)
And everybody's on your mind
Saying anything to get you by
Re: Another Poem, from a Lonely Mind..^^  [message #36201 is a reply to message #36183] Thu, 28 September 2006 15:01 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Josh is currently offline  Josh

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Hey Jason^^

I really dont know right now. *shrugs* I'm not sure if I'm going to college.^^;

~Josh~



21.

Love who you want to.

~Josh~
Re: Another Poem, from a Lonely Mind..^^  [message #36208 is a reply to message #36201] Thu, 28 September 2006 16:29 Go to previous messageGo to next message
ZeroGrav is currently offline  ZeroGrav

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you should, I was only asking cause to me you are realy good at poems. And would have thought that you would planing a major in writting.



So say what you want
(You know I'm wasting all my time)
You've gotta mean it when you say what you want
(You're only safe when you're alone)
And everybody's on your mind
Saying anything to get you by
Re: Another Poem, from a Lonely Mind..^^  [message #36226 is a reply to message #36208] Fri, 29 September 2006 18:36 Go to previous message
Josh is currently offline  Josh

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thank you^^

If I ever do go into College, then I'll think about taking writing^^

~Josh~



21.

Love who you want to.

~Josh~
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