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a new poem^^ (FINALLY. lol^^)  [message #37620] Tue, 24 October 2006 23:36 Go to next message
Josh is currently offline  Josh

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Registered: April 2006
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SO its about time that i posted a new poem on here i suppose^^ i hope you all like it^^

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New Life upon the Water, by ~Josh (Inspired by Gackt and Hyde - Orange no Taiyou)

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Life Anew, taking a strool down the memory lane of my life,
A little hard, a little soft, but still I move on,
Taking your hand in mine, Smiling with you, as the sunsets beneath us

Dreams clash of Passions fury,
Beneath the sheets, Memories are told again.
Life is a dream..
Set in the motion, giving us a chance to be real,
to take a moment, and share eachothers beauty.

Talking, sharing, swetly caressing,
Skin on skin, smile and touch, firmness of layers beneath the ocean,

I wait for you at the bottom,
as you drift down as an angel,
Wrapped in white, hair black, a sweet melody you play for me,
Letting me know that I am not alone.

Life lingers on, dearching for something,
another wave in the sea, another passion,
discovering itself, discovering me, discovering you,
Letting us break free of the chains that bind us to this world,
Letting us be free...

Free to speak,
Free to love
Free to be
Who we are,
Life is so short,
Lets live it together..
And be lovers, beneath the crimson sun.

For there, our destiny awaits us, and we will forever live,
a different life then the path that was chosed,
Goodbye to the old, hello to the new,
Say goodbye to all knew,

To move foreward, to live a little more,
Hand in hand, we will survive,
Together, Goodbye to you,
You all, as we start our own journey,
and we will never forget,
the times we spent here,
but for now i must give you a goodbye for now,
so goodbye to all of you,
and continue living on,
as you always have, so we can live as well..

Sleep with peace,
as you drift away, into the silent spring of Eternity...
Hand in hand, ride the waves, of the ocean of your dreams,
and say Goodbye to all those you knew, and live your life
the way you want to, without bars to hold you back,

Without fear of past or future,
but live Life, and Goodbye...

~Josh~



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Love who you want to.

~Josh~
Re: a new poem^^ (FINALLY. lol^^)  [message #37623 is a reply to message #37620] Wed, 25 October 2006 01:01 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Aussie is currently offline  Aussie

Really getting into it

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I like it even though it seems a little disjointed.
I am just hoping it's not meant to be a goodbye message to us.
Aussie
Re: a new poem^^ (FINALLY. lol^^)  [message #37624 is a reply to message #37623] Wed, 25 October 2006 01:02 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Josh is currently offline  Josh

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nopes^^

its not^^ im not gonna say goodbye^^

*hugs*

~Josh~



21.

Love who you want to.

~Josh~
Re: a new poem^^ (FINALLY. lol^^)  [message #37625 is a reply to message #37624] Wed, 25 October 2006 01:20 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Aussie is currently offline  Aussie

Really getting into it

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Would you like to share a little bit about what prompted (or inspired) it then?

Aussie
ps there is no requirement for you to do so
Re: a new poem^^ (FINALLY. lol^^)  [message #37642 is a reply to message #37625] Wed, 25 October 2006 12:31 Go to previous message
Josh is currently offline  Josh

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well heres how it is^^

i was just listening to the song Gackt and Hyde - Orange no Taiyou, and i started to write to the song, what i thought it would sound like in English. and then i kept writing right until the song was over and thus, the poem was born^^

i hope you all liked it^^

~Josh~



21.

Love who you want to.

~Josh~
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