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I was dreaming... (A story written by ~Josh~)  [message #39214] Fri, 24 November 2006 14:55 Go to next message
Josh is currently offline  Josh

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Hello again.

He says to him. Bright blue eyes. Brown hair, simple features. Small nose, cute smile, a laugh like a girl.

Yet, he was alright, he was just being himself, which was rather attractive for me.

Carying the books to his locker, he set them down, and looked at me. His eyes were blue again. An open smile, somewhat inviting. Pink lips, lighter then mine.

I feel an urge to walk over to him. Say 'Hi' or something. So I walk over, to help him. We put his books in his locker, and he whispers to me.

'You were looking at me.'

I blush a faint pink.

'Do you want me?'

My knees are weak. I put my arms around his neck for support. And he kisses me. Soft, yet hard at the same time.

'Meet me later.'

I remember those words. 'Meet me later.' So we met after class was done.

We walked home together. I tried to stay as far away as possible from him. Knowing that I would just throw myself at him and make desperate, passonate love to him the minute he came over.

But he wouldnt stay away. He kept coming over to me. Was he attracted to me?

He comes over again. I drop my books, and take him, his lips, his face, taking it all in, feeling him, givng his no time to breathe, as our lipos are locked together. He doesnt resist me, putting his hand around me, leaning me into him. I moan silently as our tongues meet. We waste no time...

It was like a dream. You know, the ones where the two lovers make this dramatic love scene, with passionate, blunt sex. Yet, being with him that day...

He stops for a minute.

'Do you love me?' he asks.

I have to catch my breath. Blushing at what we had just done, my voice was shaky. Yet before I can answer, we are together again. Our feelings, everything seems so clear right now.

'Yes' I scream. 'Yes'.. We cant contain our love. Removing only the shrits. And he kisses me again. Soft, beautiful lips, touching me, making me want more, knowing I would do anything for him. Anything at all..

We got our stuff together, wiping ourselves off, the dirt that covered us.

His mother comes over, after witnessing this, us, together.

'What the FUCK are you DOING!' she says.

And she takes him, by his hair, and drags his home...

It was like magic. I wondered what happened to him that night. I couldnt stop thinking about him. Its not everday you fall in love with someone, much less make passionate love with them, where everyone can see you. Yet, not caring about that, made it clear that I loved him.

On my way home, I had a dream. A dream that he was getting beaten, for loving me, for making love to me, for displaying any mormal affection that one has to another. I couldnt take it..

I screamed. I was heartbroken...

The next day, the boy didnt show up.. This made me break down. I cried, and cried, right there in the halls of the school. Did the dream I had, come true? Was he beaten? My beloved, beaten for loving someone... I just kept crying...

They.. had a funeral.. for him on Saturday. It, was raining. Not sunny like a normal day, but the sky was crying, and so was I...

I didnt go to school that day. I didnt want to be surrounded by everyone, telling me, now my sweet angel had died.. I knew what had happened. I saw it in my dreams...

I dont regret it. Not once. I would do it all over again, if he were here...

~Josh~

-- This is a story that I wrote. It's not real life. I just felt like writing a sad story right now.

Sorry I was away for so long. Please forgive me. --

~Josh~



21.

Love who you want to.

~Josh~
Re: I was dreaming... (A story written by ~Josh~)  [message #39216 is a reply to message #39214] Fri, 24 November 2006 16:03 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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also, encourage comments^^

~Josh~



21.

Love who you want to.

~Josh~
don't be sorry...  [message #39218 is a reply to message #39214] Fri, 24 November 2006 16:24 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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it ok not to post here in while, although I was wondering what happened to u.

y u feel like writing a sad story?

jay



So say what you want
(You know I'm wasting all my time)
You've gotta mean it when you say what you want
(You're only safe when you're alone)
And everybody's on your mind
Saying anything to get you by
Re: don't be sorry...  [message #39219 is a reply to message #39218] Fri, 24 November 2006 16:30 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Josh is currently offline  Josh

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hey you^^

i know you^^ *hugs*

lol

i just felt like it. just one of those days i guess. *shrugs*

was it a good story? despite it being a sad one? what does everyone think of it?

~Josh~



21.

Love who you want to.

~Josh~
Re: don't be sorry...  [message #39220 is a reply to message #39219] Fri, 24 November 2006 16:36 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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It was good but theres alot of typeOs. and a few parts I had to reread. but over good. GOOD JOB Josh (hugs)

Jay



So say what you want
(You know I'm wasting all my time)
You've gotta mean it when you say what you want
(You're only safe when you're alone)
And everybody's on your mind
Saying anything to get you by
Re: don't be sorry...  [message #39221 is a reply to message #39220] Fri, 24 November 2006 16:40 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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yay^^ it was good^^ lol

i havent written in a long time so its sort of a newer one. lol

im glad you liked it^^

~Josh~



21.

Love who you want to.

~Josh~
Such a show off... LOL  [message #39222 is a reply to message #39221] Fri, 24 November 2006 16:43 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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You r welcome. Any reason that you where gone?



So say what you want
(You know I'm wasting all my time)
You've gotta mean it when you say what you want
(You're only safe when you're alone)
And everybody's on your mind
Saying anything to get you by
Re: Such a show off... LOL  [message #39224 is a reply to message #39222] Fri, 24 November 2006 16:48 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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no not really.

i just sorta left^^ *blush*^^

and how am I a show-off?

*snuggles*

~Josh~



21.

Love who you want to.

~Josh~
I fixed some typeOs  [message #39235 is a reply to message #39214] Sat, 25 November 2006 05:47 Go to previous messageGo to next message
ZeroGrav is currently offline  ZeroGrav

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Registered: August 2006
Messages: 785




"Hello again.

He says to him, Bright blue eyes, Brown hair, simple features, Small nose, cute smile, and a laugh like a girl.

Yet, he was alright; he was just being himself, which was rather attractive for me.

Carrying the books to his locker, he set them down, and looked at me. His eyes were blue again. An open smile, somewhat inviting. Pink lips, lighter then mine.

I feel an urge to walk over to him. Say 'Hi' or something. So I walk over, to help him. We put his books in his locker, and he whispers to me.

'You were looking at me.'

I blush a faint pink.

'Do you want me?'

My knees are weak. I put my arms around his neck for support. And he kisses me, soft yet hard at the same time.

'Meet me later.'

I remember those words. 'Meet me later.' So we met after class was done.

We walked home together. I tried to stay as far away as possible from him. Knowing that I would just throw myself at him and make desperate, passionate love to him the minute he came over.

But he wouldn’t stay away. He kept coming over to me. Was he attracted to me?

He comes over again. I drop my books, and take him, his lips, his face, taking it all in, feeling him, giving his no time to breathe, as our lips locked together. He doesn’t resist me, putting his hand around me, leaning me into him. I moan silently as our tongues meet. We waste no time...

It was like a dream. You know the ones where the two lovers make this dramatic love scene, with passionate, blunt sex. Yet, being with him that day...

He stops for a minute.

'Do you love me?' he asks.

I have to catch my breath. Blushing at what we had just done, my voice was shaky. Yet before I can answer, we are together again. Our feelings, everything seems so clear right now.

'Yes' I scream. 'Yes'. We can’t contain our love, removing only the shirts. And he kisses me again. Soft, beautiful lips, touching me, making me want more, knowing I would do anything for him, anything at all.

We got our stuff together, wiping ourselves off, the dirt that covered us.

His mother comes over, after witnessing this, us, together.

'What the FUCK are you DOING!' she says.

And she takes him, by his hair, and drags his home...

It was like magic. I wondered what happened to him that night. I couldn’t stop thinking about him. Its not everyday you fall in love with someone, much less make passionate love with them, where everyone can see you. Yet, not caring about that, made it clear that I loved him.

On my way home, I had a dream. A dream that he was getting beaten, for loving me, for making love to me, for displaying any normal affection that one has to another. I couldn’t take it…

I screamed. I was heartbroken...

The next day, the boy didn’t show up. This made me break down. I cried, and cried, right there in the halls of the school. Did the dream I had, come true? Was he beaten? My beloved, beaten for loving someone... I just kept crying...

They... had a funeral... for him on Saturday. It was raining. Not sunny like a normal day, but the sky was crying, and so was I...

I didn’t go to school that day. I didn’t want to be surrounded by everyone, telling me, now my sweet angel had died.. I knew what had happened. I saw it in my dreams...

I don’t regret it. Not once. I would do it all over again, if he were here...

~Josh~

-- This is a story that I wrote. It's not real life. I just felt like writing a sad story right now.

Sorry I was away for so long. Please forgive me. --

~Josh~

"



So say what you want
(You know I'm wasting all my time)
You've gotta mean it when you say what you want
(You're only safe when you're alone)
And everybody's on your mind
Saying anything to get you by
Re: Such a show off... LOL  [message #39236 is a reply to message #39224] Sat, 25 November 2006 05:47 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Cuz you r Razz



So say what you want
(You know I'm wasting all my time)
You've gotta mean it when you say what you want
(You're only safe when you're alone)
And everybody's on your mind
Saying anything to get you by
It's 'typo', not 'typeO'  [message #39242 is a reply to message #39235] Sat, 25 November 2006 11:31 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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... unless you are talking about blood, of course!  [message #39243 is a reply to message #39242] Sat, 25 November 2006 15:53 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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I am almost certainly O+.

David
Re: Such a show off... LOL  [message #39278 is a reply to message #39236] Sun, 26 November 2006 14:20 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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well thats not very fair is it^^ lol

~Josh~



21.

Love who you want to.

~Josh~
Re: Such a show off... LOL  [message #39279 is a reply to message #39278] Sun, 26 November 2006 14:33 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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I win. LOL

:):)Smile



So say what you want
(You know I'm wasting all my time)
You've gotta mean it when you say what you want
(You're only safe when you're alone)
And everybody's on your mind
Saying anything to get you by
Re: Such a show off... LOL  [message #39280 is a reply to message #39279] Sun, 26 November 2006 14:39 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Josh is currently offline  Josh

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wait!

*pouts* thats not fair!^^ i wanted to win^_^ lol

~Josh~



21.

Love who you want to.

~Josh~
Re: Such a show off... LOL  [message #39283 is a reply to message #39280] Sun, 26 November 2006 19:31 Go to previous message
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I win! I win! I win!



Jay



So say what you want
(You know I'm wasting all my time)
You've gotta mean it when you say what you want
(You're only safe when you're alone)
And everybody's on your mind
Saying anything to get you by
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