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any body who has good story writing experience/skills willing to help a kid 14 do his first story please let me know please serious offers please jay has read the story so far all the best guys jacXXX
[Updated on: Wed, 29 November 2006 00:52]
Jay, I love u. You are my heart and my soul.
You are my other half. The final piece to my puzzle. I am complete when I am with you.
You turn a dark day into a bright sunny day.
You make me giddy with joy.Just from hearing your voice.
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cossie
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Location: Exiled in North East Engl...
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When it comes to story-writing, the languages are more different than you might think! If he's in the US, it would be much better to get help from the US, but if no help is forthcoming we Brits will see what we can do.
What's the story about?
By the way, congratulations to you and Jay - I hope it works out!
For a' that an' a' that,
It's comin' yet for a' that,
That man tae man, the worrld o'er
Shall brithers be, for a' that.
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well were from the usa but hes wrting in uk as thats were we live and he doing it as an american living in usa but he had help from a uk author but that has stopped
Jay, I love u. You are my heart and my soul.
You are my other half. The final piece to my puzzle. I am complete when I am with you.
You turn a dark day into a bright sunny day.
You make me giddy with joy.Just from hearing your voice.
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cossie
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Location: Exiled in North East Engl...
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By the way, you didn't say what the story was about.
For a' that an' a' that,
It's comin' yet for a' that,
That man tae man, the worrld o'er
Shall brithers be, for a' that.
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gay teen love semi true tale but hes living in uk so i think maybe a brit might help him more but any one would be helpfull
[Updated on: Wed, 29 November 2006 06:32]
Jay, I love u. You are my heart and my soul.
You are my other half. The final piece to my puzzle. I am complete when I am with you.
You turn a dark day into a bright sunny day.
You make me giddy with joy.Just from hearing your voice.
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timmy
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Location: UK, in Devon
Registered: February 2003
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The thing about writing is that it must come from the heart. And it must be expressive. If it does both of those then it is likely to fly. If one is absent then it may well fail.
First have a look at http://iomfats.org/storyshelf/guide/writing.html which is, in print, as much help as I can be in person, so to speak.
I'm happy to read anything, and the risk is that I may not like it, of course. I'm happy to be helpful, but I am not an editor. Others have those skills far better than I do.
Author of Queer Me! Halfway Between Flying and Crying - the true story of life for a gay boy in the Swinging Sixties in a British all male Public School
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he want help with editing and stuff not the actual story line etc like i said timmy he knows what he wants to say. can i send u the chapters hes written ?
Jay, I love u. You are my heart and my soul.
You are my other half. The final piece to my puzzle. I am complete when I am with you.
You turn a dark day into a bright sunny day.
You make me giddy with joy.Just from hearing your voice.
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timmy
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Location: UK, in Devon
Registered: February 2003
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Like I said, I am no editor. But I can read it and say what I see.
Author of Queer Me! Halfway Between Flying and Crying - the true story of life for a gay boy in the Swinging Sixties in a British all male Public School
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I have a good knowledge of spelling and grammar, and I live in the UK. If you're still looking for someone, jac mark, I might be able to help; it depends on the story's scope and length.
If you'd like to contact me, my email address is: spuriously@gmail.com
Best wishes,
David
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thank sent to ur email please the four chapters was edited and grammer checked by mike arram
Jay, I love u. You are my heart and my soul.
You are my other half. The final piece to my puzzle. I am complete when I am with you.
You turn a dark day into a bright sunny day.
You make me giddy with joy.Just from hearing your voice.
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Hi -- is the version I've got the uncorrected version? If so, there's not much point in both of us correcting all the same mistakes!
Thanks
David
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