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first poem is for tony second for myself third for Marc  [message #44006] Thu, 19 July 2007 23:23 Go to next message
Senne is currently offline  Senne

Likes it here
Location: USA
Registered: July 2007
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Diamonds in the Rough by J.a Sakal
They say diamonds are most beautiful
But I know that for a fact
they say diamonds sparkle just in the right light
But I know that for a fact
You see you are my diamond
My light my shining love
You are my darling
© Jordan Alexander Sakal 2007

Tears of Darkness
Fall from my soul
All hope is lost
My world is filled
With hopeless woe
And my eyes shall
Forever cry
Tears of Darkness
© Jordan Alexander Sakal 2007


A Place of Hope
My friend I know you are hurting
My friend I know you weep
But there always is a place to go
When life deals you a blow
I know your heart is shattered
I know you are not whole
But remember this my friend
There always will be for you
A Place of Hope
© Jordan Alexander Sakal 2007

[Updated on: Thu, 19 July 2007 23:24]
Re: first poem is for tony second for myself third for Marc  [message #44007 is a reply to message #44006] Thu, 19 July 2007 23:30 Go to previous messageGo to next message
marc is currently offline  marc

Needs to get a life!

Registered: March 2003
Messages: 4729



I'm impressed...... I dont know what else to say.


Life is great for me... Most of the time... But then I meet people online... Very few are real friends... Many say they are but know nothing of what it means... Some say they are, but are so shallow...
Re: first poem is for tony second for myself third for Marc  [message #44016 is a reply to message #44006] Fri, 20 July 2007 11:14 Go to previous message
Josh is currently offline  Josh

On fire!

Registered: April 2006
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Those are very beautiful poems Jordan.

~Josh~


21.

Love who you want to.

~Josh~
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