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~Broken Angel~  [message #52563] Mon, 25 August 2008 19:26 Go to next message
Josh is currently offline  Josh

On fire!

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~Criticize me if you want.. I don't care..~

Title: Broken Angel
Author: Joshua Ward
Music: Chris Daughtry: It's Not Over
Feeling: Sad..

Why do you look at me like that?
That cold stare in your eyes.. I've seen it before
Though you deny it, I can see the truth in your eyes..
You would rather not be with me, then have to stay
Though I try so desperately to hold on,
To what there is, what is left..

Fallen feathers from a broken angel
Scatter the world over, we are all broken souls..
Lost, trying to find our light in the darkness..
Too much red blood, has tainted the purity of the ocean..
Souls shall 'never' find peace, for we are all too desperate to scream
Perfection is a fantasy, Death is a mirage..
Poetic, even for one such as you..
I am simply amazed at your feathers,
Bright one in the sky..
May you fly home safe tonight, as the angels keep you safe in heaven...

~End~



21.

Love who you want to.

~Josh~
Re: ~Broken Angel~  [message #52577 is a reply to message #52563] Tue, 26 August 2008 00:43 Go to previous message
aqualino is currently offline  aqualino

Likes it here
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Registered: August 2005
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Josh, very good. Went to Youtube to find the music by Chris Daughtry. You did a very good adaptation.


~aqua~



There is a sacredness in tears. They are not the mark of weakness, but of power. They speak more eloquently than ten thousand tongues. They are the messengers of overwhelming grief, of deep contrition, and of unspeakable love. Washington Irving
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