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Howdee all,
Hot off the back of yet another cracker topic on the board. I took it upon myself to go home and look for a story that I have been writing for a little while now.
I have always loved writing, and even more so going back and read what emotive over-flow I have produced. As a lot of you may have noticed Poems are my number one, however I have also written a few short ( 1-2 page ) stories too.
The story that I may now need some help with is really more of an Autobiography. Based around the past few years of my life. I often deal with things a lot better when I write them down, which is what I did. Only noticing later on that it made for some good reading... Well it read well to me.
Only yesterday did I go public with this piece of writing to a friend, and she said to me that I should maybe look at publishing it somewhere. I instantly thought that there would be no place better than right here.
I would like to ask for someone to maybe read through it, edit it, hell do what you like with it. The reason I ask, is because I find it very hard to correct myself whether it be with spelling, grammar, tense, it doesn't matter what it is I am no good at it 
The story ( which is really more of a long diary entry ) is only about 19-20 pages long, but it has no set time line. I realise that it all has happened, thus past tense, but I really can not be too sure of the whole thing...
Any takers...
"And so the lion fell in love with the Lamb"
"What a stupid Lamb"
"What a sick, masochistic lion"
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Dear Tempo,
I will be glad to help if I can and you would like. I can read through and comment. I can correct typos and some thinkos and I can do it all using 'track changes' in MS Word or Open Office Writer so that you can accept or reject each of the changes I suggest.
If you need to know more about me, just ask.
Love,
Anthony
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Hi Uncle Ant,
Its me Michael, we have spoken a few times about a number of things, hope that you remember me
That would be so great thanks a stack, can I just email it through to you ?
"And so the lion fell in love with the Lamb"
"What a stupid Lamb"
"What a sick, masochistic lion"
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Yes, just attach it to an email. My email isn't hidden.
Love,
Anthony
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Thanks Anthony, you are a gem:-* Thanks
"And so the lion fell in love with the Lamb"
"What a stupid Lamb"
"What a sick, masochistic lion"
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