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Anyone bored?  [message #77570] Fri, 01 January 2021 21:36 Go to next message
Jst4Fun is currently offline  Jst4Fun

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I've never written before, but I sat down and I've got 3-1/2 chapters on paper of a little idea I've had bouncing around for a while.
If you're willing, PM me for a link and you can offer opinions, thoughts, etc.

If you're familiar with the All Souls Trilogy by Deborah Harkness, even better, as this is based on that world.
Re: Anyone bored?  [message #77571 is a reply to message #77570] Fri, 01 January 2021 22:26 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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I'm always happy to read a new story and give an ohonest opinion. 


Author of Queer Me! Halfway Between Flying and Crying - the true story of life for a gay boy in the Swinging Sixties in a British all male Public School
Re: Anyone bored?  [message #77572 is a reply to message #77570] Fri, 01 January 2021 22:56 Go to previous message
Jst4Fun is currently offline  Jst4Fun

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OK, so at someone's PM suggestion, here's a rough draft of the first 3 chapters in Google Docs. Sorry I don't use Word, I have no real need for it other than for this.

Comments welcome, in Pvt. Please don't flame me in public?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BIpLNNNoqtCwN4zc9UodyPBR ifI3zTRaJPnCe3VRXAc/edit?usp=sharing
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