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I have just finished an epic - BL Motel - no, not writing it, reading it. I'd love to know what you make of it
Author of Queer Me! Halfway Between Flying and Crying - the true story of life for a gay boy in the Swinging Sixties in a British all male Public School
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luvtwinks
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I've only read the first few chapters, but I'm not accustomed to the "comic book" nature of this presentation. I've also had a problem figuring out the character's private thoughts and dream sequences VS reality.
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luvtwinks
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I do like the storyline though.
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timmy
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Location: UK, in Devon
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"luvtwinks wrote on Tue, 04 February 2025 01:09"I've only read the first few chapters, but I'm not accustomed to the "comic book" nature of this presentation. I've also had a problem figuring out the character's private thoughts and dream sequences VS reality.
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It does take a little while to untangle thoughts from plot, but I became used to it. Distnguishing between the characters as more are intrduced was amusing, but possible.There is insufficient facial detail as they arrive.
Author of Queer Me! Halfway Between Flying and Crying - the true story of life for a gay boy in the Swinging Sixties in a British all male Public School
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