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Quite a surprise  [message #78868] Fri, 31 January 2025 20:58 Go to next message
timmy

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I have just finished an epic - mangatoto.com/chapter/1403832 BL Motel - no, not writing it, reading it. I'd love to know what you make of it

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Re: Quite a surprise  [message #78869 is a reply to message #78868] Tue, 04 February 2025 01:09 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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I've only read the first few chapters, but I'm not accustomed to the "comic book" nature of this presentation. I've also had a problem figuring out the character's private thoughts and dream sequences VS reality.
Re: Quite a surprise  [message #78870 is a reply to message #78869] Tue, 04 February 2025 02:41 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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I do like the storyline though. 
Re: Quite a surprise  [message #78871 is a reply to message #78869] Tue, 04 February 2025 08:14 Go to previous message
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"luvtwinks wrote on Tue, 04 February 2025 01:09"
I've only read the first few chapters, but I'm not accustomed to the "comic book" nature of this presentation. I've also had a problem figuring out the character's private thoughts and dream sequences VS reality.

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It does take a little while to untangle thoughts from plot, but I became used to it. Distnguishing between the characters as more are intrduced was amusing, but possible.There is insufficient facial detail as they arrive.


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