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Mark and Me  [message #72919] Mon, 29 May 2017 07:50 Go to next message
timmy   United Kingdom

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Sometimes a story ends. Other times it 'just ends'. And there are times when it ends well.

I will let you decide about Mark and Me. No spoilers, please.



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Re: Mark and Me  [message #72930 is a reply to message #72919] Wed, 31 May 2017 20:44 Go to previous messageGo to next message
cm is currently offline  cm   United Kingdom

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Thanks, Timmy.

I would REALLY appreciate any feedback - good or bad - guys. Like Timmy says, feedback is the only way we know whether what we've written works and/or how to improve it.

Thanks

Chris
Re: Mark and Me  [message #72932 is a reply to message #72919] Thu, 01 June 2017 09:47 Go to previous message
Ian John Copeland is currently offline  Ian John Copeland   United Kingdom

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Well I read Mark and Me and enjoyed it very much!

Sometimes (as in life) something short and sweet fits the bill perfectly, I recall those sorts of events when I was a boarder.  There was sometimes a half acknowledgement of what was happening, but that was all.

I won't say more other than encourage others to read Chris's tale and enjoy.

Ian



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