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Starting Over  [message #73845] Mon, 08 January 2018 09:23 Go to next message
timmy   United Kingdom

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The genre is kind of hackneyed, but to my eyes Starting Over is not. It handles what 'was not' before the incident well, and what exists after it well. 

My challenge is that the author has gone dark. He was never the most frequent poster of this tale, but he was very happy for it to be published here. After chapter 13 we have to imagine the future. That's kind of ok, too. But has anyone had any success in emailing hom to ask for more?

[Updated on: Fri, 12 January 2018 09:42]

Inconsistent use of capital letters is the difference between Bobby helping Uncle Jack off a horse, AND Bobby helping uncle jack off a horse!
Re: Starting Over  [message #73869 is a reply to message #73845] Fri, 12 January 2018 02:50 Go to previous message
Joe.mx is currently offline  Joe.mx   Mexico

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Owww im ejoying a lot this story ,i always wait to the story to finish to email to the authors to thank them , i will try to email him right now

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