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Kaiser's Magic  [message #77363] Wed, 23 September 2020 09:20 Go to next message
ivor slipper is currently offline  ivor slipper   United Kingdom

Toe is in the water

Registered: September 2013
Messages: 99

While reading this story I reached the conclusion that it should really have been titled 'Bensiamin's Magic' because of the way in which it quickly drew me in and then trapped me in its web.

I was thus rather sad to read the final chapter today. Hopefully there will be another story from this author soon.

Re: Kaiser's Magic  [message #77376 is a reply to message #77363] Fri, 02 October 2020 07:10 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Bisexual_Guy is currently offline  Bisexual_Guy   United States

Likes it here
Location: USA Midwest
Registered: September 2015
Messages: 113

I must agree.  The story and the one immediately before it, Flamer Skater

http://iomfats.org/storyshelf/hosted/bensiamin/sho rts/flamer-skater.htmlhttp://iomfats.org/storyshelf/hosted/b ensiamin/shorts/flamer-skater.html 

were excellent.

[Updated on: Fri, 02 October 2020 07:12]

Re: Kaiser's Magic  [message #77459 is a reply to message #77376] Sat, 07 November 2020 17:49 Go to previous message
Teddy is currently offline  Teddy   United States

Really getting into it
Location: USA
Registered: October 2006
Messages: 425

More great work, Ben :-) 


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