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icon14.gif T5A  [message #74086] Wed, 21 February 2018 22:25 Go to next message
dookie11 is currently offline  dookie11   Canada

Getting started
Location: dallas, TX
Registered: March 2016
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A great start for a tale .
Mystery and wonder .
Waiting for more .


Re: T5A  [message #74098 is a reply to message #74086] Sun, 25 February 2018 12:28 Go to previous messageGo to next message
timmy   United Kingdom

Has no life at all
Location: UK, in Devon
Registered: February 2003
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T5A is now five chapters in. The question is, where is it going?



Inconsistent use of capital letters is the difference between Bobby helping Uncle Jack off a horse, AND Bobby helping uncle jack off a horse!
Re: T5A  [message #74099 is a reply to message #74098] Sun, 25 February 2018 12:41 Go to previous messageGo to next message
AB is currently offline  AB   Greece

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Registered: February 2015
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Heya dookie11, glad you're enjoying the story, buckle up for the rest Very Happy
Re: T5A  [message #74104 is a reply to message #74098] Wed, 28 February 2018 22:20 Go to previous messageGo to next message
American_Alex   United States

Toe is in the water
Location: New York, upstate
Registered: October 2017
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Quote:
timmy wrote on Sun, 25 February 2018 07:28T5A is now five chapters in. The question is, where is it going?

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A common question asked about stories by Cynus. Sometimes it's like bungee-jumping....



"Able was I ere I saw Elba"
Re: T5A  [message #74119 is a reply to message #74086] Sun, 04 March 2018 15:16 Go to previous message
AB is currently offline  AB   Greece

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This story ain't cyngus' but sure I'll bunjee jump ya' around lol Razz
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