I expect simple behaviours here. Friendship, and love. Any advice should be from the perspective of the person asking, not the person giving! We have had to make new membership moderated to combat the huge number of spammers who register
The story is fast-paced, well-written, easily believed, and creates a sense of urgency and a desire to see what happens next. (At this point, I have read the first three chapters and look forward to the next tomorrow morning.)
"Bisexual_Guy wrote on Thu, 27 February 2020 23:30"
The story is fast-paced, well-written, easily believed
The believability factor is bolstered by references to current events. Specifically, the recent devastating Australian bushfires and the mention of an openly gay man running for president of the USA.
Thanks Bisexual_Guy and luvtwinks for your comments about my story. I'm pleased you are enjoying it so far. I wanted to write something that was plausible and had a current theme. I started writing this in late December 2019 when the Australian bushfires first hit the international news. It was then I thought of the idea of a group of kids being separated from the adult world because of the fires. But this is a short term separation and not Lord of the Flies so no one behaves badly, except perhaps... Anyway, please keep reading. It's not a long story.