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so i took one of my essays i had to write last year (a situational) and turned it into a short story. we have peer-editing in class, which i guess is okay and i knew would happen, except we are seated alphabetically, and the people i sit near make me nervous. not "omg they are going to think i suck" nervous, but the kind of nervous that given the topic/content of this story, i'm kind of scared they'll report me to counseling and i'll get sent away.
it's not about gay related things (so i know this is out of place here), however my NEXT story i think is going to be! a vampire and his gay "ghoul" (person who is fed off vampiric blood, and as long as they are they won't age, but they are not really a vampire either, as they can still breathe and have bodily functions, etc) who falls in love with said vampire and has to break away. ANYWAYS. like i said somewhere else here, i wanted to make this first short story assignment "easy" since i have to finish the contest story, and would one day like to work on my novella story for queer-lit.
so my question/favor is ... is there someone here who would be willing to read/critique it? my mother would hate it by default no matter if it was good or bad, and a friend of mine who is now teaching CW and english 101 (and submits her own things and actually gets paid for it, the lucky thing) is super busy. and the other 1 or sometimes 2 i send things to, to read, are too biased. as in i think they are afraid i'd freak out if they said i'd hate it. seriously, once? i wrote a total piece of garbage, on purpose, and they raved about it the same as they have other things.
it's 4 pages long, just under 1700 words (oops, i went 700 words over the given limit, but he said 2 pages, but if we need up to 4 that is fine), so hopefully not a real long read. i'll send to the first one to respond to it (or i guess if anyone else is interested, though it might end up on my writing section of my webbie eventually), and i won't need a mail-back or a response until monday, so it doesn't need to be done right away.
thanks in advance, and apologies in advance also, if this is too pushy and presumptious...  ??
my void does not want.
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robert bryce
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send it to me,I promise not to bite--its gotta be good because you wrote it..rob
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sure thing. let me find your email address -- i know you posted it somewhere here. 
my void does not want.
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robert bryce
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rbryce@tbi.net ........send me some of those deer pictures too please...rob
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I would be more than happy to help you anyway I could. But you know that already.
Keep smiling,
Kevin
"Be excellent to each other, and, party on dudes"!
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girl... you just send it my way...
i hope you already know i will read and critique if you would like... and will tell you the honest truth... but as always with love, so as to help and not to hurt at all....
also, i am sure it is as entertaining as anything i have read...
i hope, by the way, that everything is going great with you h. i will tell u about my chicago trip a little later.
(((((((((((((((((hugs and lots of love !!!!!)))))))))))))))))))))
BamBam ;-D ;-D ;-D ;-D ;-D ;-D ;-D ;-D ;-D
Celebrate your life... embrace your love... Become intimate with your place in forever !!!
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robert bryce
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thanks bam bam my computer will not process word so i cant help..sorry..rob
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can i have your email address? or else just email me at mine (it's in profile) and then i'll reply back with it.
i'm sorry rob - i tried attaching it twice as just a notepad txt file but it apparently didn't work? if you still want, later i can just paste it into the mail body.
thanks guys. (((hugs)))
my void does not want.
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robert bryce
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BTW-----my arm has been getting pretty tired lately,any boyfriend material out there????????????????..rob
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Girl, my email address is wranglin1@aol.com... and i am alway s glad to get email from you... so just send away !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BamBam
Celebrate your life... embrace your love... Become intimate with your place in forever !!!
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Hey, I wanna read too! Please, please!
You have my email addy, feel free to drop it down there anytime, or of course, anything else you'd like someone else to look at!
Thank you...!
Hugs:
-L
"But he that hath the steerage of my course,
direct my sail."
-William Shakespeare, Romeo and Juliet, Act One, Scene IV
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okay. i know you're real busy and things, and didn't want to bog you down anymore than i'm sure i already do. *sheepish!* thanks, lenny. it's on its way right now.
hugs and kisses,
h.
my void does not want.
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