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Val n' Tyne  [message #66919] Sun, 08 July 2012 09:59
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Registered: April 2012
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I've enjoyed this story since it began, but chapter 9 is the best yet. I think it is funny, sensitive, and
playful, -all leading up to the suspense of the final moment. Damned cliffhangers! Will they or
won't they...? Those two kids are just perfect together.

And by the way, thanks for the truly gross new image of caviar!
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