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The Wizard and the Torch By Flaulus  [message #77959] Fri, 09 July 2021 10:38 Go to next message
Pedro

Toe is in the water

Registered: March 2014
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Although still early days, I admit I am enjoying this story, although it does raise some philosophical questions about slavery.  It will be interesting to see what resolution the author achieves. 

I find the writing is an easy style with some nice lines that make me smile: "No, but it is. Do not try to understand. Accept post of wizard's slave will look good on his CV."

I wonder what other readers are making of it.
http://iomfats.org/storyshelf/hosted/flaulus/the-wizard-and- the-torch/01.html

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Pedro
Re: The Wizard and the Torch By Flaulus  [message #78090 is a reply to message #77959] Thu, 26 August 2021 03:14 Go to previous message
Teddy is currently offline  Teddy

Really getting into it
Location: USA
Registered: October 2006
Messages: 482



Yes, an enjoyable story for sure. Left me wanting a sequel.


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