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Forest Service Summer  [message #78532] Tue, 06 June 2023 09:42 Go to next message
timmy

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Good in the original, better in the rewrite, I like Forest Service Summer



Author of Queer Me! Halfway Between Flying and Crying - the true story of life for a gay boy in the Swinging Sixties in a British all male Public School
Re: Forest Service Summer  [message #78533 is a reply to message #78532] Wed, 07 June 2023 04:35 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Bisexual_Guy is currently offline  Bisexual_Guy

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You are certainly right about that, Timmy.  Both versions are good; the rewrite is better.
Re: Forest Service Summer  [message #78534 is a reply to message #78532] Wed, 07 June 2023 05:04 Go to previous message
luvtwinks is currently offline  luvtwinks

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I haven't read the original version, but I like the current version so far.
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