I expect simple behaviours here. Friendship, and love. Any advice should be from the perspective of the person asking, not the person giving! We have had to make new membership moderated to combat the huge number of spammers who register
Location: SW England
Registered: September 2012
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As I don't seem able to get my machine to send a message to Solsticeman using the link attached to the author's name I shall have to perform this pleasant task in the Forum.
I have been enchanted by the first three chapters of Shades of Gray. It says so much with so few words. It is lyrical, warm and - so far at least - delightfully life-affirming. I eagerly await the next chapter, and the next....
Location: UK, in Devon
Registered: February 2003
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The author took the initiative to re-edit a prior story to turn it into a full tale instead of what was a good prior read, but by no means of the same quality
Location: UK, in Devon
Registered: February 2003
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Jolyon Lewes wrote on Wed, 07 November 2012 19:17As I don't seem able to get my machine to send a message to Solsticeman using the link attached to the author's name I shall have to perform this pleasant task in the Forum.
The link works easily for those with an email client installed. If not, right click and copy the link, then paste it into your webmail (Hotmail, Gmail, Yahoo Mail, etc) system in the browser. Solsticeman will appreciate emails and posts here, and already asked me to pass his thanks on.
This is a charming and heartwarming story. I enjoyed the informal, chatty style of writing that makes it feel as if the author is confiding in the reader as with a close friend. I found it to be erotic without being pornographic.
There is an intriguing time-symmetry that suggests possibilities but isn't pushed too far.
If you're in the mood for a feel-good story, then try this!
Dear Kitzyma
How very kind. It's such a pleasure to know that you liked it. I didn't know what his mother was going to say until I typed it. Thanks again Jeff.