andypaz
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Location: buenos aires
Registered: June 2016
Messages: 16
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A very nice surprise to read a new story by cm.
Up to this point (ch 3) it develops very nicely.
The psychological definition of the characters is well achieved.
Both boys and the elder brother act very realistically. And the slutty Abe is very accurate.
It shapes as being a nice romantic love story, but with the neccesary life components.
It has a right ammount of sex. Hopefully it will keep the same in the following chapters.
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