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icon14.gif A funny line or two from my english paper  [message #10272] Fri, 09 May 2003 04:30 Go to previous message
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The original line I put in but had to take out again after consulting with Ron Smile and him pointing out I messed up the facts:

Then he made a pathetic joke about me looking like a fairy for wearing it and that I was going to get myself beat up. I just stared at him and made a solemn statement saying how different the world would be if we all looked like fairies.

I really liked that section but Ron was correct and it didn't accuratly follow the story i was working from (A Seperate peace by Knowles) It was then replaced with:

I just stared at him and made a solemn statement saying how different the world would be if everyone thought I looked like a fairy. Thinking about it later in my room alone, replaying the statement in my head, I wondered if I looked like a fairy, and whether or not the other boys would still copy my actions like they normally did.



Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?
 
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