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icon5.gif I Have A Story... and I need some help please...  [message #57133] Tue, 26 May 2009 11:12 Go to previous message
Michael-Kent Dobison is currently offline  Michael-Kent Dobison

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Location: South Africa - Gauteng
Registered: January 2007
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Howdee all,

Hot off the back of yet another cracker topic on the board. I took it upon myself to go home and look for a story that I have been writing for a little while now.

I have always loved writing, and even more so going back and read what emotive over-flow I have produced. As a lot of you may have noticed Poems are my number one, however I have also written a few short ( 1-2 page ) stories too.

The story that I may now need some help with is really more of an Autobiography. Based around the past few years of my life. I often deal with things a lot better when I write them down, which is what I did. Only noticing later on that it made for some good reading... Well it read well to me.

Only yesterday did I go public with this piece of writing to a friend, and she said to me that I should maybe look at publishing it somewhere. I instantly thought that there would be no place better than right here.

I would like to ask for someone to maybe read through it, edit it, hell do what you like with it. The reason I ask, is because I find it very hard to correct myself whether it be with spelling, grammar, tense, it doesn't matter what it is I am no good at it Smile

The story ( which is really more of a long diary entry ) is only about 19-20 pages long, but it has no set time line. I realise that it all has happened, thus past tense, but I really can not be too sure of the whole thing...

Any takers...



"And so the lion fell in love with the Lamb"
"What a stupid Lamb"
"What a sick, masochistic lion"
 
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