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the book  [message #66627] Fri, 23 March 2012 11:34 Go to previous message
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Hi new forum!

Some of you may have read my most recent offering, "The Book" which has received favourable reviews from those of you who took the trouble to write to me.

I have a slight dilemma which I would like help with in solving. I have written a new ending to "The Book" - in fact it's more of an Epilogue; the story is unchanged - and I wonder whether someone would be prepared to read through it for me (the Epilogue - which is only a matter of a few pages long) and let me know wether or not it helps the story or if it is totally unnecessary or even ruins what is an ok story!

Anyone out there willing to help me end the agony?

Jack
 
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