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The Great Benyon Chapter 4  [message #66731] Mon, 16 April 2012 07:41 Go to previous message
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I just read this chapter and felt like I missed something. I had to go back and review chapter 3 and found that I did not miss anything presented but it seems like this chapter 4 is really chapter 5 and there is a missing part to the story. In chapter 3, Logan went out to see Lorne who was suffering from the flu. Logan left Lorne to recuperate and nothing more than conversation happened between the two. In chapter 4 there is reference to the two of them having had sex together. Did I miss something in my read or is there truly a chapter out of order?

Kiwi sometimes does different things in his writing but there is continuity. Here it seems to be lacking. I am enjoying the story I just feel like I skipped a bit of it.
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