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Road Not Taken  [message #67021] Mon, 24 September 2012 04:57 Go to previous message
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This one is really nice! It's got almost all the emotional keys, and left me feeling happy and sad as well as empty and fulfilled.
Short but long enough to do the job. Good pacing and an overall feel of the story moving along without leaving you behind.
Really recommended.



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