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P.E.S.I. by Jobe  [message #71897] Mon, 26 September 2016 15:49 Go to previous message
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Story shows considerable promise, and the setting is interesting too. Not quite in the bracket of being set in the future, as everything so far is possible, and given another 5 years, could be seen.
Chapter 1 is here

I did spot two errors, both would get past a spell checker - as they are just not quite the right words. Neither detract though from the kind of story that leaves one itching for the next chapter.
 
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