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The Odd, Onward Door--No Door Left Behind  [message #73913] Sun, 21 January 2018 07:26 Go to previous message
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Wow!  Once again, Geron Kees has created an imaginative and brilliant story, continuing what was in "The Odd, Onward Door."  This second chapter of the "The Odd, Onward Door" is a worthy onward telling of more in the saga.  

We meet another interesting character, learn more about the doors, and a little bit of additional background, and it is done in such a way that the story is not bogged down.  We see the potential for several thousand adventures (although I am certain that Geron will not have enough lifetime to produce all of the possibilities).  It further will be interesting to see if Derry's mother is as open-minded as is Mike Hamlyn seems to be, about the boys and their relationship.

By the way, Geron, I am curious about how you pronounce "Cally."  Is it the first syllable of Caleb, plus the "ly" sound added, or is it like the first syllable of Calvin and the "ly" sound added?

As long as you keep writing in the "Onward Door" series, Geron, I will keep reading, if I am alive and able.  Well done again.

If any have not yet read "The Odd, Onward Door," I suggest going to the "Story Shelf" and scrolling down to the stories by Geron Kees.  He has many other interesting stories, as well.
 
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