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Possible blurb   [message #78849] Sat, 28 December 2024 01:12 Go to previous message
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Hi all, can I run this past the members on here?  It's a blurb for one of my novels, The Mouse Hunter. Does it draw you in, or not?  Any feedback you can offer I would be most grateful for. Thank you.


He's always there, in my thoughts, in my nightmares.

Steven couldn't take anymore, what thirteen-year-old could?  His secret hidden from everyone was too heavy to bear, too horrifying to share. 
Growing up in a catholic family wasn't easy and attending a Roman Catholic school where God is central is hell. Through this, there is hope, of living with his sister in the idyllic English countryside, a place to escape home life, bullying, and above all, the fear of being taken and forced to relive the horrors of his past.

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