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what a difference a day makes  [message #74694] Mon, 13 August 2018 17:04 Go to next message
andypaz is currently offline  andypaz

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A very nice surprise to read a new story by cm.
Up to this point (ch 3) it develops very nicely.
The psychological definition of the characters is well achieved.
Both boys and the elder brother act very realistically. And the slutty Abe is very accurate.
It shapes as being a nice romantic love story, but with the neccesary life components.
It has a right ammount of sex. Hopefully it will keep the same in the following chapters.
Re: what a difference a day makes  [message #74695 is a reply to message #74694] Mon, 13 August 2018 17:16 Go to previous message
Joe4fun is currently offline  Joe4fun

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Your observations/comments are encouraging,
which suggest good story line and characters.
I shall try to read this story later.
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